The #WritingProcess Blog Tour connects authors all over the
world with the intent to share blogs and the writing life. I was tapped to
contribute to the blog tour by Natalia Sarkassian, who writes fiction and
nonfiction. Her short fiction has received several awards, and her nonfiction
depicts an up-close and deeply personal understanding of foreign and exotic
cultures. I've had the pleasure of reading portions of Natalia's
novel-in-progress,
Mrs. May in Egypt,
a book that captures the current troubled climate in that country. Do check out
Natalia's blog,
Post
Cards from Italy, where you'll find her photographs to be as enchanting as
her writing.
I must confess that I feel a bit uncomfortable talking about
myself on this blog, but since I have no other blog available, I decided to use
this resource as an opportunity to introduce you to me and to some of my fellow
authors. As you explore the #TheWritingProcess Blog Tour, be sure to click on
the links from previous contributors. I can assure you that you are in for a
real treat. All of these authors are immensely talented folks, and I'm delighted
to be included in their midst.
The #WritingProcess Blog Tour asks the participants to
answer four questions, so let us begin:
1) What are you
working on?
For the past few months, I've been working almost
exclusively on the revisions of my novel, Blood
of a Stone, forthcoming from Tuscany Press in June 2014. This is a
historical literary novel set in first century Palestine. The story follows the
adventures of a slave who murders his master, sets out to silence those who
could reveal the truth about his past, and eventually finds redemption for his
crimes.
Prior to beginning the revisions of Blood of a Stone, I was finishing a draft of my second novel, The Double Sun. Set in the mid-20th
century, the story is narrated from four distinct points of view and spans
thirty years. The Double Sun is about
a family of downwinders, people who have suffered the adverse affects of
radioactive fallout from the atomic bomb tests in Nevada during the 1950s and
1960s. Many of these downwinders have been afflicted with cancer and other
serious illnesses.
2) How does your work
differ from others of its genre?
This is a tough question to answer because I'm not sure how
it does differ. However, I can tell
you what my readers and critiquers say: My writing tends toward the dark side
in that I often write about unlikeable or troubled characters, people who may
have good intentions but who make terrible choices. I have also been told that
I have a sparse, direct voice--nothing too flowery. Much of my fiction is
historical in nature or requires a fair amount of research to add
verisimilitude. My first novel, for example, takes place 2000 years ago. My
second novel begins in the mid-1950s and ends in the 1990s. Many of my short
stories also have a historical setting. Perhaps that speaks to my passion for
history and my love of research.
3) Why do you write
what you do?
I've always been fascinated by difficult, unstable, or
unhappy people. What makes them do the things they do? Why do we love them even
when they hurt us? And there is that ever important question: What if? What if Character A does X to
Character B, what will happen? Delving deep into my characters, exploring their
flaws, foibles, actions, and desires, helps me better understand the human
condition.
4) What is your
writing process?
Diane Lefer, also a participant in the #WritingProcess Blog
Tour (visit her blog,
Nobody
Wakes Up Pretty), once told me: "You are a careful writer." At
the time, I wondered if being a careful writer was a good thing or a bad thing,
but Diane, who was also my advisor at Vermont College of Fine Arts, explained
to me that she wanted me to take more risks, throw away my cautious nature and
see what happens. She sent me off to read Kate Braverman's
Squandering the Blue, and I've never been the same since. Risk is
now my middle name.
That said, I tend to be an organized writer when it comes to
managing my time and my projects. I work on a regular schedule--usually in the
morning--and set deadlines for myself. I begin every day filling out a planner,
and the highest priority item is the writing. A few years ago, I began thinking
of myself as a working writer. In
other words, writing is my job. It may be a job that I love, but it's still a
job that requires commitment, meeting deadlines, planning, and punctuality. I
know that sounds rigid to some people, but when I used to rely on inspiration,
I spent a lot of time rolling out unfinished drafts, submitting little, and
publishing almost nothing. The change in my mindset has resulted in a higher
level of productivity and what I believe to be higher quality writing.
My short stories are often formed around a single image or
snippet of dialogue that sends me off on a quest to know more. My novels begin
with the ending. I imagine a character at his final destination and begin to
sort out the journey that brought him or her there. Years ago, an early mentor
taught me the technique of story-boarding a novel. I still use this method for
drafting a book and for the revisions because it allows me to see the big
picture. In both instances, I block out the novel on a giant bulletin board
where I write a one-sentence description of each major scene on an index card.
Those cards are then arranged under the appropriate chapter headings on the
bulletin board. This makes it easy for me to see where I need more scenes,
where I have repetition, where the pace lags, etc. I've shared pictures of my
story board for The Double Sun and my
revision board for Blood of a Stone
below.
My story/inspiration board for The Double Sun:
You'll notice that I have headings for years as well as
chapters because the story spans three decades. The chapters all have titles,
and the scene cards are arranged below the chapters they appear in. On the
right side of the board, I've posted my inspirations for the book, including
photographs of various settings in the novel.
My revision board for Blood
of a Stone:
Colored index cards! Since the story is essentially mapped
out and is in the process of being revamped or remapped, I've used color-coded
index cards to indicate what revision stage the scene is in. Green cards are
still waiting my final revisions. Yellow cards are "good to go." The
chapters for this book are numbered with no titles. Earlier versions of this
book had different colored cards. It may be all an illusion, but the changes in
color give me a sense of progress.
Be sure to tune in next week to read the words of Jennifer (Jenna)
McGuiggan. Jenna and I first met in a writing workshop at Vermont College of
Fine Arts where I earned my MFA in Writing. I remember that particular workshop
as one infused with enthusiasm and excitement. My fellow workshop participants,
including Jenna, were incredibly supportive, and we spent a lot of time engaged
in stimulating discussions about craft. Jenna is also involved in roller derby,
something that scares the stuffing out
of me. Her bio and a link to her blog:
Jennifer
(Jenna) McGuiggan is a writer, editor, and teacher based in
southwestern Pennsylvania. Her articles and essays have appeared in a variety
of publications, including
Numéro Cinq Magazine,
Connotation Press,
Extract(s), and
Mingle. She previously served as an assistant editor
for the journal
Hunger Mountain. In 2009, she curated and published
Lanterns:
A Gathering of Stories, a collection of prose, poetry, and
photography by seven women writers and artists. Jenna received her MFA from
Vermont College of Fine Arts in 2011 and is currently working on several prose
manuscripts. Visit Jenna online in
The Word Cellar, where she writes about everything from
navigating the writing life to venturing into the world of roller derby.
